On Creative Commentary

This is one I wrote a long time ago during a Creative Writing class way back in college. I presented what I thought was a very serious, very deep peom--only to have one of the class members call it "Artsy Fartsy" while someone else labeled it as "Cutsey-poo." I was a little hurt so I went home and wrote this in response.
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The fractal is called Voidstar. I picked it for now good reason other than I liked it.

"Artsy-fartsy," "cutsie-poo!"

Pray these names fall not on you.

For high-flown lines and lyric tone

Bore me through from fat to bone.

Hidden meanings, metaophor phrase.

Twelve-letter words and other ways

Of showing us all how smart you are.

It's really sad you've gone too far.

Yet still I wish you much elation

As you display your new creation.

I know it's coming from your heart--see?

I just wish it weren't so Artsy Fartsy!